Chapter 2 – A Void

Chapter 2 of “The Proven Life”


Before time at our feet
One existed within the void
One image in the darkness
Only a hand

Deft fingers delicate touch
Moving mass and energy
Outwards with force
Expanding universally

From the first speck
Transformed into signs
Of life, intelligence
From light that shadows run

Hiding mystery and truth
Leaving clues
Giving light to see
Cast eyes upon this

Across the sea
To the distant shore
Truth waits
With bated breath

The one has been chosen
The one vision
The power growing
The key lying in subconscious

3 thoughts on “Chapter 2 – A Void

  1. I really like the way you’re writing is very timeless. I also like how each lines seems to build on the other, as it never seems to stop like the end of a sentence, but just flows line after line.

    • I appreciate the comments and feedback. This piece has been a labor of love, that I hope to finish before the 20-year mark. The original version was more choppy, and I went through a re-write a couple years ago, as 4-line stanzas.

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